ShmoopTube

Where Monty Python meets your 10th grade teacher.

Search Thousands of Shmoop Videos


Writing Elements and Process Videos 47 videos

Choosing a Topic
1733 Views

Choosing a topic can be extremely difficult—even more difficult than deciding which Ben & Jerry's flavor to try next. No, scratch that. Nothing w...

Escritura no Fácil
246 Views

No busque una palabra negativa. Sino una palabra que pueda ser positiva. Tales son "no se caiga", " no molestes a tus maestros" "no se coma toda...

How to Avoid Repetition in an Essay
940 Views

Reading repetitive essays can bore teachers to death because the essays repeat the same ideas repetitively. You don’t want your teacher to get bo...

See All

Both Sides of the Story 1803 Views


Share It!


Description:

When presenting an argument in an essay, you may want to play devil’s advocate. Don’t play it with the devil himself, though. That guy always wins.

Language:
English Language

Transcript

00:04

Both Sides of the Story, a la Shmoop Okay, so you’re an expert on your topic,

00:09

but hold on, bucko. We always need to hear both sides of the story.

00:13

Have you considered other points of view? The thing is, there are usually more than

00:18

two sides of the story… …and you’ll earn the respect and trust

00:22

of your readers by acknowledging it. Point out who might see the issue differently

00:27

and why. Get the most bang for your buck by choosing

00:35

the strongest or most common arguments against your position.

00:44

Give your opposition a fair trial by explaining their point of view.

00:48

Use words such as “while,” “although,” and “however” to introduce competing points

00:53

of view. Don’t set up other opinions just to knock

01:04

‘em down without a fair trial. Be craftier than that.

01:08

Poke holes in the argument by showing how it’s uninformed, illogical, or outdated.

01:16

You’ll probably wish you could razz the opposition, but bite your tongue.

01:27

Keep your tone respectful and your attitude in check, cowboy. As the saying goes, kill

01:34

‘em with kindness and bury ‘em with a smile.

01:41

But hey, you still want to stand your ground in your essay…

01:46

… so here are a few tips for giving the other guy his fifteen minutes then bumping

01:50

him out of the spotlight. For every standard 5-paragraph essay—you

01:57

know - the intro, body, conclusion—confine the competing points of view to a single paragraph.

02:06

In longer papers, a good rule of thumb is one paragraph of counterargument for each

02:10

major section. There’s always someone who will come along

02:16

and argue with your point of view…

02:18

…so beat ‘em to the punch by choosing relevant counterarguments…

02:23

… presenting them accurately and respectfully…

02:26

… pointing out stuff the other guy failed to consider…

02:30

… and confining your courtesy rebuttal to about one-fifth of your essay.

02:35

Then ease back into your own argument. Now you can confidently say that you’ve

02:41

looked at both sides of the story.

02:43

It’s what those in the business world call, “Covering one’s butt.”

02:45

Blurb: When presenting an argument in an essay, you may want to play Devil’s Advocate. Don’t

02:47

play it with the Devil himself, though. That guy always wins.

Related Videos

What Not to do in an Introduction
32968 Views

This video offers some rules of thumb for writing a good introduction. It covers everything from tone (confidence is key!) to phrases and clichés...

What Not to do in a Conclusion
7001 Views

Even the best essays can go wrong in the conclusion—this video covers what not to do in a conclusion to help avoid any essay-ending problems. The...

Using Citations Effectively
3751 Views

You want to be as picky with your citations as Goldilocks was with her porridge—not too many, not too few... juuust right. You want to prove that...

Wordiness
15167 Views

Want even more deets on wordiness? Click here to review. Or take a look at our entire grammar section for all the goods.

Run-on Sentences
6511 Views

Want even more deets on Run-on Sentences? Click here to review. Or take a look at our entire grammar section for all the goods.