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CAHSEE ELA 1.3 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
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CAHSEE ELA: Writing Conventions Drill 3, Problem 5. Which answer best fills in the blank?
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CAHSEE ELA 4.1 Writing Conventions. Which answer best replaces "had been"?
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- 00:04
And here's your shmoop du jour brought to you by verb agreement
- 00:07
because verb argument gets on everybody's nerves....[Men holding verbs arguing]
- 00:14
Which answer best fills in the blank Mr. Holmes was not at all surprised to learn
- 00:18
that the suspect had been in fact innocent and here's the potential answers
- 00:25
okay well if there were a secret [Sherlock appears beside a bouncer]
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- 00:29
password to get the right answer for this question it would be verb agreement
- 00:32
right unfortunately nobody ever let our original sentence in on this secret so
- 00:38
we start off in the past tense with was and then we shift into the past perfect
- 00:42
continuous with had been..that's a mouthful, we know past perfect continuous
- 00:48
when we see it because it usually includes the word had been sort of like
- 00:52
so many NFL football players who twisted a knee... Anyway most of the time [NFL player catches ball and leg falls off]
- 01:00
this is following up by a present participle aka some verb that ends in
- 01:05
I-N-G...alright well some examples could be he had been snoring I've heard that [Man snoring in bed]
- 01:11
before or she had been staying up all night
- 01:14
point is as soon as we see the words had been we know we're far from simple past
- 01:19
tense territory we can get rid of choice A because is, is a present tense verb
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it's important that we don't let logic get us off course here and yeah the [Sherlock appears]
- 01:30
suspect is probably still innocent in the present but we have to stay in the [Suspect grows angel wings and a halo]
- 01:33
past if we started that way so this sentence is just old-fashioned like that...
- 01:38
all right if we went with answer C our
- 01:40
sentence would start in the past and then catapult into the future no thanks [Sherlock catapulted into future]
- 01:44
C we're totally retro on this one B is the only option that keeps it truly
- 01:49
old-school the sentence starts out in the past tense by using the verb was so
- 01:54
we better recycle was in the second half of the sentence... looks like we found yet
- 01:59
another way in which recycling is important oh people be green [Football player recycling]
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