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American Presents of the U.S.? Or U.S. Presidents? Watch this SAT Writing video and figure out which one is better.
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- 00:03
Our ranch movers were still editing this endless document and
- 00:06
the key phrase here is american president of the us
- 00:11
got it So what We're going to find it down
- 00:12
in the writing here and we're just cruising away looking
- 00:15
looking looking oh there it is okay because i have
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- 00:18
to say that president is coming on time are running
- 00:20
on schedule We'd like washington solitude for not only the
- 00:22
rest of that event but many other also office by
- 00:23
american president of the us weird phrasing their president of
- 00:28
the us but all right so we're going to try
- 00:30
to figure out what the better answer is to be
- 00:33
here on we're thinking out loud Well there's no need
- 00:36
to say american and us since they both referred to
- 00:40
the same thing right that's kind of like saying a
- 00:43
clueless congressman sorry just kidding that we love you guys
- 00:47
these days so just so everyone knows that we're not
- 00:50
talking about american presidents of student government or american presidents
- 00:55
of the bowling club it's best to say us presidents
- 00:59
which on top of being clear also avoids adding a
- 01:02
third of to the sentence right We're dieting down jenny
- 01:05
Craig ing They're so great answer is just us presidents
- 01:09
that's How read as is the sentences redundant american presidents
- 01:13
Yeah it's true but us is more accurate since american
- 01:16
presidents could technically be presidents of any other country in
- 01:19
north or south america Just removing the word american leaves
- 01:23
the sentence with a third of which in our book
- 01:25
well is at least one of too many So that's
- 01:28
it u s presidents i solemnly swear it's us presidents
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