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This passage on The Treasury's Beginnings may need some improvement. Watch this SAT Writing video on The Treasury's Beginnings to do so.
Transcript
- 00:02
Okay writing shmoop furs Five of eleven here come prized
- 00:06
of now let's see let's go find it here in
- 00:11
paragraph two to ensure proper traffic handling We're going that
- 00:14
national face we countdown political times calling her doesn't committee
- 00:17
of five hundred congress on april one on april fool's
Full Transcript
- 00:21
day a treasury office of accounts comprised off and auditor
- 00:27
general and clerks was established to facilitate settlement of claims
- 00:31
and republicans with government You knew collins okay well comprised
- 00:35
of is wrong We know that well the whole comprises
- 00:39
the parts the parts composed the whole right tattoo that
- 00:44
somewhere but not on comprise means consists of so in
- 00:48
other words whole consists of the parts In this sense
- 00:51
the hole is the treasury office of accounts and the
- 00:54
parts are the auditor general in you know the clerks
- 00:57
comprising acts on its own without any help from of
- 01:02
got it So the answer is c they're comprising the
- 01:05
author's confusion likely comes from the fact that it would
- 01:07
be correct to write a treasury office of accounts composed
- 01:12
of an auditor general in clerks but it's incorrect as
- 01:14
they comprised of so get rid of a remember the
- 01:17
hole is composed of the parts but take away love
- 01:21
and while the whole comprises the parts without that of
- 01:24
the sentence with composing would mean the parts of the
- 01:27
treasury office of accounts make up the whole of the
- 01:30
auditor general in clerk And that just doesn't make sense
- 01:33
Neither does compromised of which has a completely different meaning
- 01:37
and to meet in the middle regarding a disagreement And 00:01:40.053 --> [endTime] well there's No disagreement on this one It's wrong
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