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Texas EOC English 2: 1.5 Revision 168 Views
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Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop du
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jour brought to you by the family farm Why did
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the scarecrow win a prize It was outstanding in its
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field All right check the following passes biography of walton
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james Okay jenny wants to add a sentence before sentence
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eight in order to improve the transition into the second
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paragraph which of the following sentences should she add and
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hear the potential answers All right well if we want
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to find a good transition sense then we'd better know
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what its sandwiched between So check out seven here while
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to receive several important medals of honor during world war
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two and he served in the navy from nineteen forty
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one to nineteen forty five and then number eight walter
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married his high school sweetheart My grandmother martha we'll send
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seven is about walter in the war and sends a
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is about him getting his family going So the perfect
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transition sends will take us smoothly from one idea to
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the next Well option a isn't really a transition it's
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just a statement that walter made it home from the
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war which is already kind of obvious since his granddaughter
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exists to write this essay Right Well choice see doesn't
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set us up to talk about family life It makes
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it sound like we're going to talk about how walter
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was changed by the war We're sure the war changed
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walter Plenty but the next car wrapped doesn't dig into
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that He sort of gets is going in the right
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direction Walter did start focusing on family life instead of
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the military but that was because he wasn't in the
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military anymore and like the war was over ultimate lady
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doesn't give us any useful information He is the right
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answer It clearly links the end of the war to
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the beginning of family life for walter so depending on
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how he and martha got along might not have been 00:01:41.005 --> [endTime] different
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